Dusty bass tab by Kings Of Leon

Ok here is my tab of Dusty (Youth & Young Manhood recording) by KOL.

Open to constructive criticism.

Main Riff
G-----------------------------|
D-----------------------------|
A---------10/14--17-----------|
E--12--12-----------15--15-15-|


Break x6 (Or 24 single notes)
G-------------|
D-------------|
A-------------|
E-15-15-15-15-|