Is The Fact That I'm Trying To Do It For You bass tab by Inhale Exhale

Hey, this is a bass tab I did by ear for this. It's off in a few
places, but it sounds alright when I jam it with friends.
 I hope you enjoy it!
 Drop-C
Intro

C|-0-0--00------| ---------------------|
G|---------3h5--| --00-11-00-11-101----|
C|--(intro)-----| ---------------------|
F|--------------| -play every 4th time-|X4

Repeat that until :36

Then I play (but I know it's not completely right):
Chorus 1:
----44--------44--------|
-------55----------54---|
------------------------|
------------------------| X6 until :48, at :48, I play this:

--44444--00--44-000----|     |-44444-00-0-2-6/5B----------|
-----------------------|     |----------------------------|
-----------------------|     |----------------------------|
-----------------------| 3X, |--on the fourth, play this--|

Chorus 2: (1:00)

--888-333-555-000-11-3h5--|
--------------------------|
--------------------------|
--------------------------| X8, I think

Then back into the intro at 1:28, then choruses at 1:48/2:11, intro once more, then this:

----5-3-00-0-000-| the rhythm on those opens can be tricky.
--33-------------| Just repeat that until the song ends
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Please comment on this if you have any corrections. I know it's off at a few points, but